Are you kidding? This was perfect and if it's really your first - well you are a HELL of a writer!!!!! In fact it's refreshing NOT to have Edward always the dominate. Which is probably why everyone is enjoying the story so much - the 'dog' is in charge!!
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Date: 2011-03-16 06:53 am (UTC)No, please I want more of these. (smiles x3)