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Title: Peach
Characters/Pairings: Jacob/Edward *gasp*
Rating: R for a bit of a sexy time!
Words: ~700 of pure porn.
Warnings: rimming, slash, language 
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] elainemalfoy , [livejournal.com profile] curiouslyfic , [livejournal.com profile] bleedforyou1  <33
Summary: Jacob...yeah...it's gratuitous porn so... I'll come back to this later.  
Notes:
This might be that Top!Jacob/pillow biting!Edward I may have mentioned before...


 

“Jake wha-“ Edward draws away inching up towards the headboard but Jake drags him down again.

 “Stay still,” Jake growls. He kneads his fingers over the cold skin of Edward’s bottom and spreads his cheeks apart. Licking his lips he gazes at the soft peach colored ring in the center before planting a second kiss in the same spot.

 “God, no. I hear what you’re thinking and you’re not—you can’t--”

 “Quiet, Cullen,” Jake murmurs.

 He wants it all. Every last bit. Is that too much to ask? Certainly not. He laps experimentally at the puckered flesh and is delighted to hear Edward gasp.  

 “Jake we just had a shower…just don’t, please,” Edward whimpers. Jake can see the head of Edward’s cock is already stiff. Not a surprise. Everything turns Edward on and Jake worries that he’s created a monster, but then he pushes that worry aside because it’s a stupid thing to worry about. He wants Edward just like this, desperate and panting.  He reaches around and grips the length of Edward's cock. Edward groans and Jake’s own cock stirs in response.

 After nearly a century of sexual frustration, it takes Jake all of two days to fuck it right out of Edward. Two days inside the Cullen household as the rest of the family hunts. Two days and Jake fucks Edward on every surface in the home; breaking china, mirrors, windows, ruining the chaise lounge and the sofa. Teeth marks are everywhere because fuck, Edward is a biter. He has to sink those pearly fangs into something and as enticing as it is Jake has no intention of being the target of those teeth.

 Now the bed dips where Jake is sitting; it’s the only bed in the Cullen home, and the only surface they haven’t touched. And Christ, Edward’s bathrobe is lifted and his ass is exposed so Jacob can have access to everything. 

 Jake has fucked him so hard and so often in two days that the peachy hole is swollen. Jake kisses it a third time and dips his tongue inside; the taste is sweet and bitter at the same time. Edward squirms. He’s not breathing anymore or maybe Jake just can’t hear him. He licks at the hole, swirling his tongue as Edward writhes beneath him. He makes wet, sloppy noises because kissing Edward here is Jake's favorite thing, but he’s never learned to do it without the mess of saliva trailing down the inside of Edward’s thigh.  In minutes, Edward is pushing back, riding Jake’s face the same way he rides Jake’s cock. Jake grabs Edward to steady him, icy sharp hip bones jutting out against Jake’s large heated palms.

 “Jake, please.”  Edward is moaning and still he’s riding Jake’s tongue. Jake pulls Edward closer, sucks harder, only stopping once to breathe. He can hear his heartbeat in his ears and not much else.  It wasn’t easy to get here, every time Jake went to put his lips on Edward’s bottom, Edward would seize up and panic. Even though Jake kept telling him, “It’s just a kiss. Just a little kiss.” A little filthy kiss. Now Jake’s here and he wonders if he’ll ever be able to leave. Edward is an enigma, he’s the only one that makes Jacob crazy every time. 

 Jake can hear the pillow shredding as Edward attempts to contain his pleasure; keep it all inside and not break the fucking bed. Jake can hear the slick sound of Edward fisting his own cock though, and the rip of fabric as Edward’s teeth tear holes in the feather pillows. “Jake, I’m going to—“ Edward gasps, his voice is deep and raw and sticky like syrup and Jake wants to lick that up too.

 “Come then,” Jake whispers against the raw, wet pucker. He doesn’t even breathe properly before his tongue is plunging again and suddenly Edward is clenching. Jake blinks in shock and notices the feathers floating around them like snowfall.  Edward’s body stutters beneath Jake and come spurts from the purple head of his prick all over the once pristine sheets. Jake thinks just watching this is enough to bring his own cock off untouched. It almost is…

 Edward collapses in a shivering heap, all exposed and vulnerable and Jake can only sit there, dizzy, licking the taste of Edward off his lips. Edward really is the most beautiful thing Jake has ever seen, Christ. It's taken them forever to get here.

 



Date: 2011-02-26 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yenny2206.livejournal.com
That was hot!!!

Date: 2011-02-26 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Thank you!! ♥

Date: 2011-02-26 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elainemalfoy.livejournal.com
Guh yes!!! Pillow biting is totes canon lol.

(p.s. now you can't say anything about me writing misfits cause you wrote the dreaded twilight fic...muahaha)

Date: 2011-02-26 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
IT IS!!! LMAO!

(p.s. Man, eff you! You caused this lol)

Date: 2011-02-26 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] folkin-up-again.livejournal.com
ugh this is soo good, you must write jakeward again! loved this, thanks for sharing!

Date: 2011-02-26 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Haha! Thank you for reading! I might write more :D

Date: 2011-02-26 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleedforyou1.livejournal.com
He makes wet, sloppy noises because kissing Edward here is Jake's favorite thing, but he’s never learned to do it without the mess of saliva trailing down the inside of Edward’s thigh.

RIMMINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2011-02-26 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Icon♥
OH YES!!! Thank you for the beta dear <333

Date: 2011-02-26 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xoxxblitz7.livejournal.com
Gorgeous! Filthly, but gorgeous - just how I like my fic! :)




Date: 2011-02-26 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Haha! Thank you for reading! I like my fic the same way <33

Date: 2011-02-26 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com
This was hot.

After nearly a century of sexual frustration, it takes Jake all of two days to fuck it right out of Edward.

Great!

Date: 2011-02-26 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you for reading :D

Date: 2011-02-27 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com

Hot, sexy and somehow still sweet and romantic. Love the line about Jacob fucking Edward all over the house after 100 years of celibacy :)

Date: 2011-02-28 12:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
First of all that icon is WIN!! May I snag it?

Also I'm glad you like it! Thank you for reading!!

Date: 2011-02-28 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wirrrn.livejournal.com

Snag away. And write more Edward/Jacob :)

Date: 2011-02-28 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you!! ^^

Date: 2011-02-27 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starry-nights88.livejournal.com
My head just exploded. Thanks for that.

That was fucking great!

*goes about cleaning up brain matter*

Date: 2011-02-27 05:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] akris632.livejournal.com
Nasty and Hot!! I like it. Jacob is freaky and Edward is explosive?! Yep, that makes for a good story.

Date: 2011-02-28 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Hee! Yes, I wanted it to be filthy :D I'm glad you like it!! Thanks for reading! <33

Date: 2011-02-28 12:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Aww! *hands you a towel for exploded brain*
So happy you enjoyed it :D Thanks for reading!!

Date: 2011-02-27 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] envy-venis.livejournal.com
holy s***! very nice. i'm always searching for good jakeward. thanks for sharing :)

Date: 2011-02-28 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Thank you for reading!! So happy you liked this one :D

Date: 2011-02-27 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luciusmistress.livejournal.com
That was hot! :) Edward so needed that :P

For some reason, I can't stop picturing the Cullens' reactions when they come home. XD

Esme: "Dear, I'm so very happy for you for finally finding someone you can... um... be close to. But could you please not bite the furniture so hard? That chaise longue was almost as old as you are..."

Rosalie: "EWW, Edward! A f!#&ing werewolf? You're SO dead to me!" *storms off*

Alice: "Oh! O-oh!" *runs off to masturbate, mumbling:* "I'll order a new dining room table now, so it should get here before..."

XDDD

Date: 2011-02-28 12:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Bwahahaha!! Yes! I love it!! Alice is totally into it, Rose is a bitch, and Esme would be all 'this is great, Edward dear' :D

It baffles me that a man would go a century without sex haha *mind blown* /o\

Date: 2011-02-28 04:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] walkonwaterbabe.livejournal.com
hot, and yea like someone already said Edward needed to have a good release form Jake, and he ceritain got it, please write more Jakward

Date: 2011-02-28 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Hee! Thank you for reading! I might write more if I'm inspired again haha :D

Date: 2011-03-02 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lovergyul.livejournal.com
That was soooooo Hot!!!! Damn!

Date: 2011-03-02 06:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Thank you!! :D

Date: 2011-03-02 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annie-lautner33.livejournal.com
Excellent!!! x3 I liked =)

Date: 2011-03-02 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Thank you!! ♥

Date: 2011-03-16 06:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ingrid44.livejournal.com
OMG - talk about HOT, I need to catch my breath!

Loved it. "Two days and Jake fucks Edward on every surface in the home."
but I've got to ask - why the frustration? Edward would never let Jacob do him in this fashion? Or was Jacob always 'the bottom'?

Still, this was FAB! Hope to see more of your writings. *hugs*

Date: 2011-03-16 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
Hmm... well idk how it usually works in the fandom but I like the idea of Jacob as a top :D The rest is probably pretty AU or OOC lol. I apologize if it doesn't sound right this is my first time writing the pairing.

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you thought it was hot :D *hugs back*

Date: 2011-03-16 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ingrid44.livejournal.com
Are you kidding? This was perfect and if it's really your first - well you are a HELL of a writer!!!!! In fact it's refreshing NOT to have Edward always the dominate. Which is probably why everyone is enjoying the story so much - the 'dog' is in charge!!

No, please I want more of these. (smiles x3)

Date: 2011-03-16 07:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thepretender501.livejournal.com
*blushes* Wow, thank you xD
All I knew before writing was I wanted it to be filthy and I wanted Jacob on top lol. I'll definitely write more if inspiration strikes :D :D :D

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